Submerged


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The look in your eyes
Calls to me...
Drawing me into your quiet mind
And I am submerged in beautiful thoughts
Your voice quietly whispering
Your dreams
And I listen entranced
Like never before
As I float

Dana



~ Written for Poetics @dVerse Poets Pub
Please leave me your thoughts below!


10 comments:

  1. Very beautiful... I love the way it sort of fades away.

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    1. Thank you JoAnn! I really appreciate you stopping by to read!!

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  2. smiles...sounds like a peaceful moment..floating...nice...there can be so much in someone's eyes...right..

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    1. Peaceful... full of awe at what you hear and feel! Letting yourself get lost in someone... all things I miss!

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  3. smiles....listening is beautiful thing, esp when we truly do it...and submerge into someone as you have in this....

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    1. It is a beautiful thing... you truly know you care about someone when you can lose yourself within their words and mind.

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  4. I love the feeling of floating before someone's eyes ~

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    1. It's that feeling you get when your so wrapped up in someone... their eyes, their face... listening to the beautiful thoughts that spill from their mind.Thanks Grace for stopping by!

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  5. Oh, I so know how this feels... it's so soft, so lovely. So, perfect as is your poem describing it.

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~ Walt Whitman

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