Hhhhaaaa! Clever use of soft ahhh's before the crunchy noise of PLUNK and SKULL.
Thanks! I had fun with this one!
showing anger - kudos!
I like it! Even if it's about angry things. ;)
Well done, Dana. I can see and feel this one.
To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!