dang...you really bring on the emotion as you go along in this...love the drawing of the heart...letting others touch your scars and them smearing them...but what a whumph in the end there...
Thank you so much Brian! I'm really proud of this one. It came at me and begged to be written!
This is pretty much awesome. I especially like these:"Sketch my heartIn charcoal""FlawsBold in blackBeauty""As my memory blursFrom your thoughtsAffixing me with the unimportantLike we never were"Excellent, so-very-sad ending.
Thank you very much! I really appreciate you stopping by to read!
Emotional write--the last bit just grabbed me--really well done!
Thank you very much Audrey!
This saddens me. Especially the "Like we never were." And the pointing of fingers. Yes, truly sad.
It definitely is a sad situation written directly from the heart. Thank you Mary!!
This is a stunning poem... I especially like the first stanza, Dana.
Thank you Laurie!! I appreciate your comment!!
Affixing me with the unimportantLike we never were...oh hecke...what a tight close...a very emotional write dana
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Wow! This is starkly beautiful and packed with emotion. You did very well!
Oh Jo, thank you for coming to visit. I do appreciate your opinion!!
The way you chose to spell Burned and not burnt talks with the verses...as if living in the traces left!
Yes, the wounds are still very fresh. Thanks Akila!
The opening lines grabbed me ~ Searing write here with that image too ~
To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!