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A delightful poem, very entertaining.
Thank you Dave!!
hope they do turn and look...whispering love letters in the wind...i like that line...but the feeling def comes thru...
I'm afraid I'm gonna have to give up on this one... well... maybe not! haha Thanks Brian!! I love that line too!
Well, they are missing out if not... oh, I love the 1st stanza.
I agree Laurie, but you can't lead a horse to water if it doesn't want to drink!! I really appreciate you coming by to visit!!
Keep whispering that love spell! Maybe a little louder if they don't turn around!I could practically see words spiraling around and falling! Beautifully written!
Thank you!! I will definitely try!
Love the repetition in the last two stanzas ........
I like this very much. The repetition is so very effective.."chanting, chanting" and "Look my way, look my way." I do hope that whispering love letters into the wind brings love. If so, it would be a beautiful thing!
Nicely done. As others have said, I too like the rhythm with the repetition. I always think this adds something special to a poem.
Oh, so beautiful a love poem ... the image of your words weaving a spell is beautiful ...
Love your rhythm and chant, how you wove it all together with beautiful images-wonderful :-)
To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!