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Rain on my parade
Cause I know you will
Eager to bring me down
I've got to tell you though
It ain't gonna work
Cause I've already won this round

Dana



For Wordsmith Studio's creative prompt
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2 comments:

  1. I like the defiance in the last lines. It's a great reversal of the first two.

    I'd like the metaphor of the parade and the final line to synch up some how.

    Great work!

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  2. I never tried or ment to

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