Can't Get You Out of My Head


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As the last trace of sunlight makes way for the moon
And the stars begin their journey across the sky
I'm left within the darkness
Alone- My thoughts
As uncertain as the night
Fall to you
Haunting me
Unceasingly


Dana




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21 comments:

  1. mm nice...i like your use of the night as uncertain...and it implies the dark thoughts of the haunting as well...

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    1. Thank you Brian! At night, my brain tends to go into overdrive!

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  2. Williams said,"Make it new." >KB

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    1. I'm trying... believe me, I'm trying! Thank you for coming by to read!

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  3. Yes, indeed, at night thoughts turn to certain things...we have no control...
    Well penned.

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    1. I really have no control, but I do try to distract which works for awhile. :) Thank you Mary!!

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  4. I'm left within the darkness..hope the light brings better thoughts.
    Nice work Dana...

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    1. It already does Truedessa... but right now the night is not my friend!Thank you for coming by to read!

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  5. haunting in the true sense of the word. thank you

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    1. Thank you Tracy! I appreciate you taking the time to stop by for a read!!

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  6. the thoughts tend to find their own ways..esp. during the night when we come to a rest...

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    1. You can definitely try to fight and avoid them, but they will find a way. Thanks Claudia!

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  7. The ending leaves much room for thought ~ At night, my thoughts go highwire too ~

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    1. The night can be a very lonely time for many... Thanks Heaven!!

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  8. Thoughts..."uncertain as the night"
    I could write a song around those words--they grabbed me, Dana.

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    1. Thank you Steve!! I really am excited and very thankful for all the wonderful comments you've left on my poems. I'd love to collaborate! haha I appreciate your enthusiasm!!

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  9. You capture a hollow quiet filled with lyric sounds.

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    1. Oh my goodness... that is a beautiful comment. Thank you very much!!

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  10. Some beautiful lines here. Sunlight makes way for the moon and haunting me unceasingly. I agree with the folks suggesting lyrics. I think I've mentioned that to you in the past..you could be a song writer.

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  11. The night can sure haunt, need some light to shine on through

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