tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post4567267275758275904..comments2023-05-08T08:02:34.240-05:00Comments on Crazy, poetic life: Watch Me BurnDana Dampierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-67241197180053732892022-10-27T16:25:56.503-05:002022-10-27T16:25:56.503-05:00A wonderful poem of strenght and resilience!A wonderful poem of strenght and resilience!dwru27https://www.blogger.com/profile/05141757323340816228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-36815433148403895322013-03-12T15:10:35.334-05:002013-03-12T15:10:35.334-05:00This is great, Dana! Well done.
-TALUThis is great, Dana! Well done. <br />-TALULinda G. Hattonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14378994713184881963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-62674005068178557142013-03-12T13:56:54.944-05:002013-03-12T13:56:54.944-05:00Well done, Dana! Really strong ending. I really li...Well done, Dana! Really strong ending. I really like "I'm consumed with a hunger/to live like never before." TALUMichelle Pondhttp://www.mapoetpoems.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-65334232533835362212013-03-12T12:01:11.667-05:002013-03-12T12:01:11.667-05:00Wow. You first comment from Mary took the words ri...Wow. You first comment from Mary took the words right out of my mouth. Seriously, I was saying that as I was scrolling down to comment. Excellent. ~TALUKenya G. Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03901164070843042029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-84100692378721317362013-02-01T17:14:56.376-06:002013-02-01T17:14:56.376-06:00Hi Dana,
Really admired the conviction in this poe...Hi Dana,<br />Really admired the conviction in this poem, how we can keep going even when it is a struggle.Enjoyed this..LT..LorraineTanjeanhttp://www.lorrainetanjean.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-91857828443801688422013-01-17T23:15:52.876-06:002013-01-17T23:15:52.876-06:00I can see it in all it's glory! Thanks Meena!I can see it in all it's glory! Thanks Meena!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-75487687054493633082013-01-17T23:14:29.045-06:002013-01-17T23:14:29.045-06:00Thank you very much! I just might have to work on ...Thank you very much! I just might have to work on that! I've tried writing one song in the past and it pretty much stunk... but this one has already started out better! I appreciate your comment.Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-73002462428947064402013-01-17T13:55:15.061-06:002013-01-17T13:55:15.061-06:00Yes! The woman on fire! This is full of power.Yes! The woman on fire! This is full of power.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02903355774364525437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-63236224178784602442013-01-16T14:58:20.151-06:002013-01-16T14:58:20.151-06:00Lovely and powerful poem Dana. This would be wonde...Lovely and powerful poem Dana. This would be wonderful to read first thing every morning, don't you think? Veronica Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15288280932510764014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-83740864735019231452013-01-16T11:41:57.440-06:002013-01-16T11:41:57.440-06:00Very empowering! Well doneVery empowering! Well doneBeth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-66056784434511080672013-01-16T09:13:11.228-06:002013-01-16T09:13:11.228-06:00Very strong! Love it!Very strong! Love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16887235644350294616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-89377087872903705942013-01-16T05:11:44.350-06:002013-01-16T05:11:44.350-06:00Very nice job, Dana. I agree with Fred. It could...Very nice job, Dana. I agree with Fred. It could be a great songAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-74655994665399519472013-01-15T23:48:56.609-06:002013-01-15T23:48:56.609-06:00very nice, rhythmic and lyrical. Would love to se...very nice, rhythmic and lyrical. Would love to see this expanded into a song with more verses, you have the refrain/chorus, really nice to work around. This is what I love about lyrics, when you can isolate a part of one, that works as poetry, it's a terrific foundation for songwriting, how I approach it anyhow. Really liked this. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-40086979930120440432013-01-15T23:33:35.567-06:002013-01-15T23:33:35.567-06:00this is a wonderful hunger...going...falling...get...this is a wonderful hunger...going...falling...getting up again...embracing life...i like...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-7564120142877359772013-01-15T23:28:28.136-06:002013-01-15T23:28:28.136-06:00Wonderful to forge ahead with fearlessness! Good ...Wonderful to forge ahead with fearlessness! Good luck! k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-10354558642794569972013-01-15T23:11:58.386-06:002013-01-15T23:11:58.386-06:00Dana: strength, poise and determination. Change in...Dana: strength, poise and determination. Change indeed will be in the making... A phoenix rises from its ashes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-36391288199156175962013-01-15T22:30:09.089-06:002013-01-15T22:30:09.089-06:00Thank you very much! I appreciate you stopping by ...Thank you very much! I appreciate you stopping by to read!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-65721367093390690402013-01-15T21:26:15.944-06:002013-01-15T21:26:15.944-06:00Breathes of strong determination. Very good.Breathes of strong determination. Very good.AKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07380733832074205678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-62486165380547578332013-01-15T20:30:09.242-06:002013-01-15T20:30:09.242-06:00Thank you Jennifer for the awesome compliment! I r...Thank you Jennifer for the awesome compliment! I really appreciate that!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-27576712304801960202013-01-15T20:28:45.904-06:002013-01-15T20:28:45.904-06:00I appreciate that Heaven!! Thanks!I appreciate that Heaven!! Thanks!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-799202647104640302013-01-15T20:27:33.307-06:002013-01-15T20:27:33.307-06:00Thanks Ayala!!Thanks Ayala!!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-14462624255044041572013-01-15T20:26:35.105-06:002013-01-15T20:26:35.105-06:00Thank you Gretchen! I need all the courage I can g...Thank you Gretchen! I need all the courage I can get right now.Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-66945030933853132482013-01-15T20:25:31.263-06:002013-01-15T20:25:31.263-06:00I can't tell you how many times I have tripped...I can't tell you how many times I have tripped and fell, but I always get back up again. I'm on an upward path... I can feel it. Thanks Brian!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-7776607723809664392013-01-15T20:23:43.456-06:002013-01-15T20:23:43.456-06:00Thank you Mary! I hope to continue on this path fu...Thank you Mary! I hope to continue on this path full of confidence as it should be.Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7965057919533255375.post-62995800912768329782013-01-15T19:53:17.124-06:002013-01-15T19:53:17.124-06:00Brilliant, strong. I can imagine people hanging yo...Brilliant, strong. I can imagine people hanging your poem up as the new year beginsAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05004133697092560471noreply@blogger.com