love the rhythm of this.. and the photo too!
Thank you very much! I love the picture as well and was determined to use it!
High on love... wonderful.
Thanks Laurie! Love is a wonderful feeling!!
Very, Very cool. I especially like the last verse. The first two verse are extremely well writen---they just roll of the tongue.
Thank you Jessica! I've been thinking about those first two lines for a few days now... and finally the poem came to me.
"My thoughts, your cocaine." -- Love the originality in this!
Love is a drug! Thanks Mary
I specially like last 3 lines though it is your closing last line that pulls this together ~ Strong voice ~Nice to see you at the Pub ~
Life has been very crazy here... but I try to stop in whenever I can! I really appreciate that Heaven. Thanks!
thoughts can def be addicting....esp if the words are right...smiles....def a nice cadence to this...
Words, thoughts, love... very addicting! haha Thanks Brian!!
great job poeticizing the inner thought and the last line, so good. Thanks
Thanks Fred!! I really appreciate you stopping by to read and leaving such a awesome comment!
nice..that made me think about a german poem we learned at school about the power of words...def. they are powerful and can get deep under our skin..
The final three lines draw you closer and closer in, but the whole poem is so musical.
To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!