Thoughts, feelings, words burn within my soul and yearn to spill forth from my fingertips in the form of poetry. I'm just a girl on fire....
ugh. hard end...when dreams and reality dont match...and makes one wonder just what gets in the way of it...
People sometimes see what they want to see... not what really is. Thanks Brian for taking the time to stop by!
Ah, I think there are a lot of lives like this....from the outside we only see the 'castle,' but inside the castle there is an empty shell!
Oh this one does have a hard ending. So sad when the castle is but a shell.
Yes, sometimes looks can be deceiving
Some relationships are sadly like that, seeming perfectly happy on the outside, but empty and disconnected on the inside ... you captured this feeling well.
I love this poem... It makes me want to read more.
I just wonder... when dream and reality clash, which is primarily to blame? Love this.
Oh, make believe meets reality! Nicely done.
Sometimes, unfortunately, this is the reality and there isn't a fairy tale ending. I like how you captured so much feeling in your poem.
Oh... love this sad poem. Well done!
To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!