Thoughts, feelings, words burn within my soul and yearn to spill forth from my fingertips in the form of poetry...
I like the defiance in the last lines. It's a great reversal of the first two. I'd like the metaphor of the parade and the final line to synch up some how. Great work!
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To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!