Hi Dana,I enjoyed this poem for it's dark images,it created the right effect for sure.Very nice work.And I might add thank you for supporting our site.
Thank you! I'm not sure where this poem came from... it just popped into my head.
Very dark but, also great imagery. For something that just popped into you head, it's brilliant.
Thank you! I love it when poems like this happens.
I could see something like this coming to a person in the middle of the night when images appear as extensions of our thoughts. Glad you shared.
Thanks Mary! I appreciate you stopping by to read.
smiles...i love the night...but it also carries great symbolism...the swooping predators invading your thoughts...maybe i read too much into it...i have come to terms with my darkness though...the shadow scares me no longer...
I've made peace with the darkness as well. It took me awhile... I literally was afraid of the dark! I do feel like I've become apart of the night since I tend to be a night owl.
That is a bold and shadowy image ~ Very nice share ~
Great atmosphere and I agree with Brian, acceptance is key.
dark and remarkable. a great read
the winged creatures as extension of the thoughts...maybe not bad at all...brings in a new dimension maybe and helps us see things from a more lofty view..
Sometimes you have to embrace the dark...even when it's a bit spooky.
This makes me think about when I was young and had nightmares every night. I'd fight the night, refusing to sleep.
Great image, that last, identifying thought with those swooping and rather ambiguous night creatures.
Dark and great!
Thanks everyone! I appreciate the comment love from everyone and the support you all give me!
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