Thoughts, feelings, words burn within my soul and yearn to spill forth from my fingertips in the form of poetry...
Very nicely done! Takes me to the Scream by Munch! Very strong images and feelings.
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Terrific ending. Brings life to the painting.
Dana, This is such a visceral exclamation of thwarted desire and pain. The phrase "fractured scream," easily heard reverberating in the bleak landscape.Pax,Dora
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loved the lines " to capture the pleas , of broken things" . you captured me with this line
Thank you! I appreciate you stopping by! I have been in a drought for so long. I'm hoping this poem will break that!
I love where the artwork took you: a powerful response!
This painting has prompted such very different poems, and such intensity of writing. This is a real poem of the anthropocene, of ecological despair.
Thank you! I always find the different perspectives very interesting and love reading where others go!
I really like the ending... I can see both hope and the darkness you describe in that painting.
Thank you! Sometimes we have to experience those dark moments to appreciate the light!
The winter does enter us that way sometimes. But the trees will know spring again, and so will we.
It certainly does! Thank you for stopping by!
a very haunting poem .... well done!
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Oh my....I really felt that, as well as heard it, wonderful rhythm, every word, line, packing its punch, and clicking perfectly into the next line. Wonderful...
Thank you very much! That means a lot due to this being the first thing I've written this year! I've been in a slump!
To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!