Thoughts, feelings, words burn within my soul and yearn to spill forth from my fingertips in the form of poetry. I'm just a girl on fire....
Pride can be so damaging and if there is no understanding, there will never be any compromise either. How sad. Lovely capture in those few words.
Yes it can be... it's a very dangerous thing if misused. Thank you for stopping by!
endlessly...i like the word. pride can keep people apart ~ lovely share ~
I had another word there when I first wrote it, but it just didn't seem right. I finally came up with endlessly and knew that it was perfect. Thanks Heaven for stopping by!
The disappointment is very vivid in this poem, Dana. I related to the 'tortured eyes' visual. Thank you for sharing this. =D
Thats exactly what I wanted to convey... a hidden disappointment, hurt. I appreciate you stopping by to read!
Thoughts of Pride and Prejudice...
Yes... it does go there doesn't it! Thanks for a wonderful prompt Tess and coming by to read.
Pride can be so evil.
Yes it can. If taken for granted, misused... it can be such a bad thing.
sometimes we just want to deny it...to face it would surely be dangerous...the truth often is....
Yes... it's not good to do so, but we often do.Thanks Brian for coming to visit.
Tortured eyes and endless waiting - so sad. Captures the picture.
She just seemed like she was waiting/watching for something, the way she was gazing out the window.I appreciate you stopping by to read!
I'm remembering what my mother told me about vanity going before the fall ~~ she was right. Nice writing.
Thanks Helen for sharing your moms words and stopping by to read!
Beautiful!!between the parallel lines
...and I fear she will, wait forever.
Thanks everyone! I appreciate your comments.
To have great poets... there must be great audiences ~ Walt WhitmanThank you for being that audience!